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[tahariel]

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This Mortal Armour

I know this is still a WIP, but I've been thinking lately that I might really benefit from having a proper beta reader. Would anyone be interested? I'm looking for someone to give it a really in-depth reading and poke at it viciously until I weep but it's much better. (Kidding about the weeping... I think.) Mostly I want to approach it like a real editor would, if that makes sense.

Hope someone feels they can help! I'm not a big fan of asking on comms for a total stranger to do it, since you never know what you'll be getting.

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[pobbit.livejournal.com]

I usually have time to spare so I would be willing to help. Most of the time, if a piece of writing is good I tend to sink into it, so my constructive criticism takes a while. However, I do re-read and pick things out, find the parts that sound a bit strange or don't really work and offer some suggestions. The offer is there if you want it.