Poem: life dentistry

[tahariel]

You
                        left.
            There is a space where you were,
a vacuum, starless;
                        a hole in lost time.
                                    A gap, like a missing tooth
            I niggle with my tongue while waiting for the bus;
                                    sore and open but with no chance of filling.
            You did not choose this.
            Neither did I.

Comments

[heyhoolou.livejournal.com]

I LIKE THIS TOO :D

Okay, no really. Again, visually this is a beautiful, and I love the connection of the gap between you and left, then followed by the mention og a hole lost in time.

♥

[tahariel.livejournal.com]

Thanks honey :) I only just checked here because I haven't been getting my notifications hence delay.