As for the post - I think LJ is fairly dead right now. Or at least, my LJ is.
It looks like you posted it on a Thursday and as a rule I don't get to check my flist on Thurdays because I don't get back from Guides until 10pm. Gotta go to bed now - Guides starts in 8 hours - but e-mail it to me and I can give some concrit!
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As for the post - I think LJ is fairly dead right now. Or at least, my LJ is.
It looks like you posted it on a Thursday and as a rule I don't get to check my flist on Thurdays because I don't get back from Guides until 10pm. Gotta go to bed now - Guides starts in 8 hours - but e-mail it to me and I can give some concrit!